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Touching Perfection by *katakuscythe:iconkatakuscythe:

Categories Manga/Anime > Digital Media > Drawings

©2006-2009 *katakuscythe
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Don't be fooled by the title, this picture is far from perfect. in fact...

I HAVE A REQUEST. PLEASE critique. I want to make this picture better. I want to be able to take this one down and put up a much improved version. If you hate it, tell me why. If you like it, tell me why, too, then tell me how I could make you like it more. Help will be very much appreciated.

Anywho... the title comes from the character, who is an android... sorta. He started out as a regular ol' demon with a degenerative muscle disease and a genius for cybernetic technology. As parts of his body began to wear out he would replace them, until there was nothing left of his original body. He's a huge narcissist, who believes he has trancended normal organic life and become as close to perfect as one being can be, but he isn't a bad guy (unless you ask TakTak)

This was a request by a friend. Cuz she loves Coby. :D Dun cha, =onnaevilsmith?

linework done in ink, rest in photoshop.
Coby (c) Me

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!LordZim Jul 26, 2006, 4:54:26 PM
whoah, that looks interesting and kind of cool!!

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~mewsie Jul 26, 2006, 4:56:45 PM
Why of why are their blotches of a motherboard... :tries to peel them away to sneak beneath: -^^- Yummy.

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~three-planes Jul 26, 2006, 4:57:42 PM
Well, it's a good idea, but I don't like how the strips are different from the background. You should try filling in those sections with that part of his body modified.

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=onnaevilsmith Jul 26, 2006, 5:08:07 PM
:XD: :XD: Your so mean. See see I am supposed.. SUPPOSED </b< to be working on my profile in Adobe Premier Pro.. withing with Techno music as I show pieces of my artwork and my animation.. but you see?.... I"M HERE LOOKING AT HIM!!! .. cause you told me to... damn you.. Daaammmnnn yyooouuu. :XD:

You make me grin and shake my head, I'm getting weird ( or interested looks) from the students around me.... sneaking peeks between working on this back n forth from my project that is due at the end of the class period. ( No worries it's already been an hour and I have 3 hours left and I am almost done :XD: So I should be done relativly soon, then again I have to burn a CD. . . . BAH! *shakes her fist at the teacher* stop sounding like Bob Ross!!!


AHEM! *cough* wow I am rambling. Sorry about that! :XD: What was I going to say. Oh yeah! COBY! :D :D :D He's wonderful yes he is.

The thing I would suggest is to work on maybe having a darker shadow on him... maybe you could add it in a different shade.. making it look almost unnatural... but that is just a personal opinion. The wires meshing from his tail ( which I forget he has all the time for some odd reason ) brings interest and perverted thoughts I shall not speak of in the classroom.. but I am sure you can guess that that would come from me :XD: I'm ownah right? He looks like he is actually strapped into the motherboard, but then again.. this is him and he looks like he is liking it alot.

Heheheeh I like his purple eyes.. he looks good with um! ^^; You make me happy when you dun hafta and shankyuu! :heart: I shall now try and make my thoughts holy and try to continue with my project...

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"I would much rather be hated for who I am than adored for who I am not"
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=onnaevilsmith Jul 26, 2006, 5:08:50 PM
..... SEE!? He distracted me from my own CODING!!! *pointing accusingly*

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"I would much rather be hated for who I am than adored for who I am not"
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*katakuscythe Jul 26, 2006, 5:13:16 PM
Huh, that's an interesting idea. I did something similar with a picture I did of a cybernetic character a LONG time ago. Maybe I should try it again. Thank you for the comment! ^^

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"I'll take away your bucket..." - Wesley
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=onnaevilsmith Jul 26, 2006, 5:15:15 PM
*looks where one of the sections are*....
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.................. :D Go for it! :D

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"I would much rather be hated for who I am than adored for who I am not"
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*katakuscythe Jul 26, 2006, 5:35:24 PM
O:-) Who, me? Distracting? Naw.... I like his purple eyes too. and even though he didn't TECHNICALLY have them when he was an android, I just like them so much I had to put them into the piccy.

I hope you like eet!

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"I'll take away your bucket..." - Wesley
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=onnaevilsmith Jul 26, 2006, 5:38:09 PM
NO! I HATE IT!...I HATE IT DRAW HIM AGAIN!... :3


You know I :heart: it!

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"I would much rather be hated for who I am than adored for who I am not"
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